Hello, time for another video. This one is basically the same as the last one, not by choice I should say. I keep reading comments on essays in these free IELTS groups on FB by people who have no idea what they are talking about. This is bad, giving people false hope that their writing is good, when in reality it is not…
Like the last video, someone told the author their essay was band 7.0+, and when I read it, I was like “in what parallel universe is this a 7.0?”..it was no more than 5.0 on a good day. It’s the same with this one, according to the members of the group this essay is another 7.0+ piece of writing, when in reality…it is way short…if you don’t believe me, watch the video and see.
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