Hello everyone, as you might have noticed I haven’t been very active recently. This is in part from moving from my old office to a new apartment, and new work commitments at school, etc. I have also been busy working on OET, and developing my Patreon package for OET test takers. However, I am still helping students with IELTS and today I am going to share a student essay with you that I assessed this morning. Now, I don’t usually work for free, who does?…but I was approached by a student who is self studying and I decided to lend a hand. So, here is her essay with my corrections and comments. I didn’t have time to do my usual full marking for all criteria, but I thnk it will do the job to point her in the right direction. I have more detailed lessons available for free on YouTube, so if you want to know more you can watch those.
You can read the essay and my comments here